Wednesday, October 31, 2007

There is a time in probably all our lives when we feel mushy enough like a poet or deeply involved into some concentric area in our lives & ultimately those thoughts get transferred onto paper in terms of a poem....
However idiotic it may sound its true for most of us!!! and in some unknown wy it helps us grow. well heres a composition from me wrtten in jan 2001.... This ones really sweet (acc to me) & kiddish too... but its has its own thing....
PS: Do not read this piece with any expectation!!!


The Secret Of our Relation


Things between you and me aren’t very smooth,
Sometimes they seem to me like a withered trees root,
But there is some bond that keeps us tied,
This one fact with each other we cannot hide.


You are always opposite in everything I do,
But you are always there when times are blue,
We show so much hatred towards each other,
But have strong faith in one another.


At times we try to keep peace,
Things then are much at ease,
But we both aren’t ready to accept this fact,
And suddenly turn opposite to each other’s act.


Things aren’t right,
If they don’t go wrong,
This is the secret,
Of our very strong bond




Cheers
Sne!!

3 comments:

Shriyanka Hore said...

cute reminisces of childhood crushes haan???nice :)
u actually saved sth from 2001...impressed !!!

mohit said...

have read the poem countless times earlier...! :) he he. ;) but feels nice to read again, trust me. intro was good too. congrats on the second post. do take care!

Anonymous said...

Namita

somehow the other we r attached with someone for some reason n with some special for without any reason , it might easy to live without it but not easy to forget it, time never stops n changes has to be there in everybodys life but still we r attached with those feelings n will be attach till the time take a last breaht .

well i'm really impressed with u r poem .

cheers

Namita