Thursday, June 19, 2008

In a moment


It was a beautiful day,
We were just the two of us,
And not even a word to say,
The usual talks were as if vanished,
Silence had kept the two of us banished,
Knowing not how to begin,
My head was rolling in a spin,
I felt I was loosing control,
Or had I lost on a whole.


He stepped forward in my direction,
I discovered in me a cultivating new edition,
My heart skipped a beat,
But I had somehow started to like this meet,
His next move was unknown,
The soul from my body was as if flown.

I couldn’t describe how I felt,
His touch made me melt,
I surrendered to him instantly,
And found my whole self in him fluently,
His arms felt the most secured place,
My love today had acquired a new base.

I felt drunk without wine,
The drowsy effect in me was his crime,
But the culprit would not be punished,
As a new beginning it had flourished,
This brief moment of love,
Made me feel like I'm in a bliss,
Now in life I have no further wish,
But to be forever his!!

This was written by me on Jan 14, 2002. Thought I'd put it here!!!
Hope you like it.
Its one of my favorites. A little kiddish & very naughty.

Cheers,
Sne!!

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

Beautiful !!

Though amateur, but very Romantic and indeed very Naughty ..... :)

Waiting for the next blog..

I am what i am said...

i loved it..but it left me thinking whoz he :)

Aakash said...

Wow!!!!

That was really good yaar!!!

Utterly Romantic!!!

Keep writing!!

Unknown said...

Yummmm !!!

Very beautiful...So true n real

Falling in Love ...is the best feeling ever...

..When is the next coming :)

Vebo said...

Nice poem.
The best I've ever read from non-professional writers. :-)

I wish I could write this much sensibly.

Keep it up!

crazy devil said...

Nice one..I visited your blog while I was scrawling through orkut of my frns

Anonymous said...

raw....guess it was the first luv experience....but beutifully captivated in strings of words.....
made me think of my own first time.....
cheers indeed!!!!

Vineeta said...

Nice One!!!!........
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Like Silence Unspoken, words also speak a lot!!!!!!!!
Guess u got it!!!!!!

DIAMOND said...

Gr8 sne!!.....but i thought it was 2005-2007.....thats means ur imagination is gr8 which u put up in words...keep it up!!

Snehal Vaidya said...

Thnx vipul :))